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Hey Deacon! I really enjoyed your slideshow. My favorite part is when you introduce the 'swag broccoli'. Why did you use a broccoli? Your tips of being cyber safe are really good. Maybe next time you do something like this, elaborate more on what you have to say instead of just doing one sentence. That may help a bit more. Oh and just before I go, make sure you re-read your work before posting it. Just make sure that there is punctuation and that the words are complete (e.g To keep YOU private info safe. Change to 'To keep YOUR private info safe) Bye Deacon!
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Hey Deacon! I really enjoyed your slideshow. My favorite part is when you introduce the 'swag broccoli'. Why did you use a broccoli? Your tips of being cyber safe are really good. Maybe next time you do something like this, elaborate more on what you have to say instead of just doing one sentence. That may help a bit more. Oh and just before I go, make sure you re-read your work before posting it. Just make sure that there is punctuation and that the words are complete (e.g To keep YOU private info safe. Change to 'To keep YOUR private info safe) Bye Deacon!
ReplyDeleteYours truly,
Jessie-Lee:)